Hopefully myself on the side, too.
The first challenge posed is to write an Elevator Pitch: a short introduction about the blog and why it is there. Matticus and Kestrel have at least revised theirs, so I'm in a good company.
What can I say about this blog. I'm writing about my experiences and thoughts about World of Warcraft. From the viewpoint of a newcomer. From a viewpoint of an ESAK. From a viewpoint of social casual gamer with family.
Now, how to combine the definitions I just mentioned...?
Some taglines to replace the old one:
- BullCopra: World of Warcraft as seen by a social, casual gamer dad.
- BullCopra: Much bull about World of Warcraft
- BullCopra: No horns, but casual gaming in WoW.
BullCopra is my personal blog about my experiences and thoughts about World of Warcraft and issues I see and experience while playing as a casual gamer with family.
Wow. Less than 30 words.
My blog is my view of the games I play, especially World of Warcraft and MMO's, and it's emphasis is on the exploration, social community and issues I encounter in the games as a curious and casual gamer dad.
Better. But I just read Kestrel's elevator pitch and find mine inadequate.
BullCopra is a blog about World of Warcraft through the eyes of casual gamer dad, who's interest in the game lies in the social gaming, exploring the content and finding ways to improve the game as whole. I write the blog for the casual gamer from the viewpoint of how the newcomer, viewing the game from my own first timer experience. Occasionally I may write about something else touching my gamer life, like other games or game news in general.
80 words. And I think I got it all in there.
Nice.
Tagline will be the first one, as it will be easy to change as soon as the game of my choice changes. Not soon, that is.
BullCopra: World of Warcraft as seen by a social, casual gamer dad.
The Elevator Pitch
BullCopra is a blog about World of Warcraft through the eyes of casual gamer dad, who's interest in the game lies in the social gaming, exploring the content and finding ways to improve the game as whole. I write the blog for the casual gamer from the viewpoint of how the newcomer, viewing the game from my own first timer experience. Occasionally I may write about something else touching my gamer life, like other games or game news in general.
Did I get it as you have viewed this blog?
5 comments:
The whaaaa? This is something I've not seen yet, so I guess I'm not part of the gang! ;)
Link? Too lazy (and busy) to google :P
Pedantic I know, but there were a few typos in your copy:
BullCopra is a blog on World of Warcraft through the eyes of a casual gamer dad whose interest lies in social gaming, exploring the content and finding ways to improve the game as a whole. I write the blog for the casual gamer from the viewpoint of the newcomer; viewing the game from my own first timer experience. Occasionally, I may write about something else touching my gamer life like other games or game news in general.
@Ysh: I left the URL out deliberately to keep the lazy people like you away from the goodies... In truth, I was too lazy to check it myself so I rather transfer the traffic to Kestrel or Matticus who have linked properly to http://www.problogger.com
@Crucufer: thank you for the proof reading. As I've emphasized over time, English isn't my native language, so I'm prone to do such mistakes as you have corrected. As soon as I have time, the post will be updated with your proofed version.
Thank you both.
C out
Neat post - I've signed up for the problogger 31 day challenge as well, although I'm not advertising or writing about it on my blog. I think it's neat that you are though! It'll be fun to see what else you have to say as the challenge comtinues =D
continues*, even!
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